For my monthly e-newsletter, Better Writing at Work, I have about 2000 subscribers. When I write each month, I imagine Barbara in Seattle, Wanda in Federal Way, Ray in New Orleans, Marjorie in Vancouver, Steve in Johannesburg, and other readers around the globe.
When I finished the February issue on Friday, I almost published it with an error in how I addressed the reader. In my final proofreading, I caught myself having written:
For those of you who are interested in. . . .
No reader is "Those of you." Each reader is "you." I changed the sentence to read:
If you are interested in. . . .
If you too publish a newsletter, your subscribers understand that when you write "Dear Nguyen" you are writing to many other people and addressing them by name too. Nevertheless, each reader is an individual. Each reader is "you" rather than "all of you" and "some of you."
I will continue to think happily of individuals around the world reading my newsletter. And when I address each one of them, I will try to remember to use "you."
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