In sales letters and email (and even in telephone messages), many people end like this:
"If I don’t hear from you before then, I will call you on Friday."
There has always been something about that statement that has not felt right to me. It’s not a threat, no. And it is positive: "I will call you." But it just doesn’t work for me. The other day I realized why not.
I was staring at the words on the screen when I saw the problem:
" . . . I don’t hear from you . . ."
It’s that negative peeking out of the sentence that must have made me nervous. That’s why I like these alternatives:
"I look forward to talking with you. I will phone on Friday."
"I will call you on Friday unless we have talked before then."
"Phone me if you get a moment, or I will follow up on Friday."
"If you have a chance to call me before Friday, great! Otherwise, I will call you then."
What do you think? Are you satisfied with "If I don’t hear from you?" or do you use another approach? Please share your views.
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