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May 01, 2019

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Holly Roten

Definitely needs a comma.

Bart Rosenberg

WHY IS IT ALL CAPS? "Great" should not be capitalized. It that a single closing quote or an apostrophe in "you're"?

Jane Braynard Barr

The top portion addresses (speaks to) the teacher directly. Like Holly, I believe this lovely card needs a comma: "THANK YOU, TEACHER!"

I also agree generally with Bart's comments. However, if this card were to be presented by a young student, it would not be uncommon for the child to SHOUT with enthusiasm. Perhaps CAPS were chosen deliberately for emphasis. Without additional context, it's hard to know what the artist/writer intended.

kls

Yes, a comma after the "Thank you" and a lowercase g for "great." And why is the ruler only 10 inches long?

It's a mighty pretty poster so never mind the errors. It is prettier than they are glaring. (I'm scared writing this, wondering how many glaring goofs I'm making.)

Larry

I believe that technically there needs to be a comma after "you". But in this context, a "fun" card, I wouldn't insist on it or mark it as an error. Same with the lower case g. I think this one falls closer to personal preference.

Peter Schreiner

In light of the levity, I'm in with no error.

Patti Emslie

If anything, a hyphen in thank-you however, I'd be inclined to leave it as is given the context.

Deborah

I don't mind the all caps - it's a card after all, so I bet it's a choice based on aesthetics. It's meant to stand out.

I also believe there should be a comma after "thank you" and "great" should have a lower case.

Especially since it's addressed to a teacher, there shouldn't be any mistakes!

Cassie

Funny how the one that screams at me is, THANk. Why is there a lower case k when the rest are capital?

Patty Rechberger

I love the card, and think it's perfect as is. Yes, technically there should be a comma and a lower case g, but it's all forgivable in the context of the card. There are no glaring mistakes, no loss of clarity, no offensive grammar issues.

I also think the all caps was done for emphasis and/or aesthetics.

Lynn Gaertner-Johnston

Thank you, everyone, for weighing in on the quiz. I have corrected the card in an image above.

Are you surprised at the need for a comma? Yes, directly addressing the reader in a sentence requires one or two commas. The first sentence in my comment here required two because the word "everyone" appeared in the middle of the sentence.

Holly, you're right--the card needed a comma.

Bart, I think the capitalization is fine for a card. We would want to use traditional capitalization in an email or another work communication.

Jane, you got the comma right! Thanks for elaborating on the capitalization question. I agree with you.

Kls, thanks for your generous spirit--and your perfectly correct comment. You made me curious about 10-inch rulers--I found them online.

Larry, I'm going to insist on that comma. You may have heard of the "Let's eat Grandma" example. We need punctuation!

Peter, how do you feel about the corrected version of the image? That comma is important to me and the proofreaders of the world.

Patti, "thank you" does not need a hyphen in this context. However, it does when the phrase is used as an adjective (thank-you card) and as a noun (He wrote a thank-you).

Deborah, I'm with you. However, I'd let "Great" stand as is since it's an exuberant message.

Cassie, interesting catch! I think it's just a handwriting issue.

Patty, thanks for your positive attitude. I like your thinking that the cards is perfect as is. Wouldn't it be wonderful if we all regularly received such thank-yous?

Again, thank you, everyone! I appreciate your input.

Lynn

Chanakavp

Should we apply the style rule "Use exclamations sparingly"?

Lynn Gaertner-Johnston

Chanakavp, that's a great question. Because this card expresses very positive emotions, I believe the two exclamation points are appropriate.

"Thank You, Teacher" and "You're Great" may seem a bit flat without the exclamation points, especially with the exuberant design.

Lynn

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